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[personal profile]artificialowl, 2025-02-22 [original]

OMG ANON WHO ARE YOU I LOVE IT AND I HOPE YOU SEE THIS COMMENT!!!

I loooove gloomy post-game fic and you set up such a great mood and atmosphere here. I love that you touched on some of the other characters (and OMG, Cyan helping to run a casino is definitely something I'd want to see, it feels like it'd be his ultimate personal hell of machinery and electronics lol), and the idea of a victory tour not really feeling like a victory tour because yeah, everyone WAS just despondent for a year. I love that you set this in Zozo! And that it stops raining in tandem with the kiss! It's such a nice little piece of hope, and maybe, you know, Locke and Celes will finally figure out their mess of a relationship lol (it's, of course, what I love about them - the mess).

Funnily enough, I'm also working on a Locke/Celes fill that has some similar bits to yours, so like, we're on the same wavelength here.

THANK YOU SO MUCH ONCE AGAIN, this was SUCH a nice surprise to wake up to <3

[personal profile]lassarina, 2025-02-26 [original]

OH MY GOD THIS IS AMAZING AND INCREDIBLE AND I HOPE YOU ARE STILL HERE TO SEE COMMENTS

The little humorous turns of phrase ended me in the best way, and I love how that counterbalances the hellish weight of their not-victory tour, and their not-speaking both in a political sense and in a personal sense. The line about falling together because there was no one else - ouch, damn, nail on the head.

his highness apparently tethered to Figaro in some kind of innovative experiment in the delegation of royal duties this is FLAWLESS
and, with admirable consistency, a hole now oh god I wheezed, perfection

What a wonderful contribution to the kiss battle, thank you!!!