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I really like how you’ve examined the culture Braska is facing, the prejudice of marrying an Al Bhed woman but Spira being desperate enough to let him try, and how Auron feels about it all.
The second part of the drabble is a nice time shift focusing on Braska’s unconventional pilgrimage.