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[personal profile]eggsbenedict, 2023-07-09 [original]

This is so touching. Both Jill and Clive's mannerisms are so easy to visualise with the way you've described them, including Clive's sigh!

I definitely took a while to use the Ramuh Eikon once I got it...

[personal profile]speperteristico, 2023-07-23 [original]

Such a lovely study on grief. I loved the imagery and the gestures - Jill starting to move and then stopping! It all felt so tangible. Kudos ;__;