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[personal profile]Newty, 2023-12-23

😭😭😭 i love so much how youve given terence a community in the hideaway crew and how many details you weaved in about their time there!! dion accumulating books and terence repairing floor panels, and all the references to old conversations from tarja and harpocrates;; i really loved how dion admitted how little he can do but that he's gonna give it to others anyway. im sososo obsessed abt the arm, and calling it that was such a brilliant way to convey their fear of it, their attempted detachment, and the way it's come to mean more than just itself. terence confessing 'no' at the end was such a big moment that you allowed him to have and it pulled all of his use as a pillar of strength into challenge. i rly loved all of your organization and the steady, forward tone you used too. tysm!!!!