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lavendre, 2023-12-25 [original]
Absolutely fantastic voices and what a fun premise in every way!! Olivier is delightful and full of himself, which is such a great contrast against the rest of the cast. His banter with Dion, who was completely unprepared to suddenly have a stowaway to deal with on his return to Twinside, was hilarious and sad in equal measure. It is fun to imagine what kind of character he would be outside of Ultima's corruption.
A delight to read, thank you for sharing.
muuchan, 2023-12-28 [original]
This was so good! And you've written such an adorable Olivier. By the time I finished the fic I was just going "Family, family :D" .... I'm kind of happy to see Dion have his brother :( ♥
siruaps_aptu, 2024-01-29 [original]
Great fic! Loved the relationship dynamics, and the ending felt happy and hopeful for Olivier, poor boy. He was very delightful to read. Loved his and Dion's development too!
RoxasItsuka, 2024-03-03 [original]
An amazing one-shot.
Olivier is such an underrated character so it's nice to see something where he has character development.
His innocence and naivety were realistic and funny and it was nice to see his relationship with Dion in a positive light. They probably could have had a good relationship if not for Ultima and Annabella.
I was surprised at Clive's hostility towards Olivier considering he's usually civil and polite with others (although it could be because Olivier is a reminder of his mother's betrayal). It was nice to see Joshua friendly towards him.
Anyway, a good fic to read. I hope there's some more Olivier-centric stuff in the future.
PS, his misunderstanding about Clive and Jill was hilarious.
This is amazing! I loved your solution to the Ultima problem with Joshua burning it out of Olivier, and the stuff about how being possessed for most of his life has messed with his mind and perceptions. I also really liked the way you developed his relationships with everyone else - his siblings, the other Hideaway kids, even Tarja and Harpocrates. The last part where he and Dion head out to find Terence and the other dragoons is great, and I really liked the Dion/Terence stuff. The part about Olivier learning medical stuff was also really good and a great direction to take him in. Thanks so much for writing this for me!