Comments for fic no. 109
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silverinerivers, 2021-08-09 [original]
oh my heart ;-; this was so good!
Val_Creative, 2021-08-10 [original]
What a good image! I love the idea of them cuddling in the passageway!
svgurl410, 2021-08-10 [original]
Oh, poor Remus! You can really feel his pain here and his loneliness. He needs a hug badly. I just love the idea of Sirius and Remus cuddling in the passageway when they were in school. So bittersweet and lovely.
Great job!
pauraque, 2021-08-10 [original]
I love this. Great imagery and a vivid glimpse into Remus's heartbreak.
The_Wavesinger, 2021-08-21 [original]
I'm really sorry for the late comment, but I really like this!
You've packed so much into so few words, Remus' grief and the sense of deja vu, of coming back to a place that used to be home so long ago, and how everything in his life has changed since then.
I love the imagery of the memories, of the statue and the link between the past and the present, and how you sketch out the scene with so few words, the sense of him being almost caught out of time while the students of today just go on with their lives as he did when he was a student.
loved and at peace
Oh ouch.
Thank you so much for this fic ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥.
Muccamukk, 2021-08-09 [original]
Awww. Poor Lupin. This is so beautifully bittersweet.