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[archiveofourown.org profile]Phlyarologist, 2020-08-12 [original]

Aw, this is really awkwardly sweet - some nicely done introspection and a great payoff. Playing up the class differences and all the various ways Edgar doesn't really know how to relate to people is a great take. It makes that moment of connection feel more deliberate and well-earned.

[archiveofourown.org profile]sphinx01, 2020-08-13 [original]

A wonderful take on the class differences the game doesn't really dwell on. Great work!

[archiveofourown.org profile]MrLowell, 2020-12-31 [original]

Lovely Lovely! A shame the game doesn't pick up on that, it's a very interesting narrative :O

(and then they kissed. lol)