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innerbrat, 2015-12-25 [original]
Oh my godddd this is awesome! And it reads exactly like a Guardian article, too :-) just... The narrator's voice is perfect.
And what a perfect dick you've made of Jason! (And particularly all the things designed to really piss off a Guardian columnist, too! He writes mediocre music! He's not good with words! He wouldn't give an interview!) I agree with the commenter above me - Emmie deserves so much better!
Rachel! Sammy! I love that the baby is just thrown in by Jason/Emmy out of spite, and of COURSE there's more to Rachel than ballet. The ending was great - poor Sammy!
I'm a but gushy because it's 4am, but I LOVE it! Thank you, mystery author!
loversinfiniteness, 2019-04-17 [original]
Exquisite satire that is both totally absurd and completely serious. Also fuck Jason: his evilness is perfectly plausible and the more grotesque for it.
He had gone home with Davige that night, and since then, she had made no live appearances, nor recorded any new songs, other than the one on Lynch’s new album. I sent an email to Lynch’s agent asking if I might have an interview.
I realize this isn't the point of the fic, but man did I get stuck on this. aaaaaaaaaugh Jason you DICK! It totally happens, too, and that's horrible. GET OUT, EMMA. YOU CAN DO BETTER. YOU WERE DOING BETTER /o\
Man, I did not expect the twist at the end, either.
“Does your sister have children?” I asked.
“She’s still in high school!” said Rachel.
There was another pause.
“No,” she said.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>:( I hated the skater boy already but now I'm really cross.